pieces

the world in pieces
lying broken at my feet …
oh that’s my other

on 2010/03/08 at 09:25 | Reply souldose

Haiku at its best
on 2010/03/08 at 10:15 | Reply Existential Poet

Hello souldose! Thanks for the comment… You know, when I wrote this haiku, I hesitated. I wrote the last line a couple of different ways, and I decided to go with this way. I felt it, you know?

But I remember getting comments a while back about the “lack” of resolution in one of my haiku. But of course, for me, it’s a personal favorite, as it is for you, apparently. :)

I do love nature haiku, too. I write plenty of them.

But nothing can top the sound of one hand clapping
on 2010/03/08 at 12:27 | Reply Jingle

the world is in fight,
it depends on how you see it!
Happy Monday!
on 2010/03/08 at 12:28 | Reply Jingle

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/08/1731/

Shakira nominated you as our Thursday Poets’ Rally week 8 winner for perfect poet award.
Please consider accept it, welcome join our Rally in week 9.
Happy Blogging!
on 2010/03/08 at 13:30 | Reply Existential Poet

Hello, Jingle,
I appreciate the awards and interest in my poetry. However, I have 6 blogs! I can barely keep up with my own writing. It’s a big commitment I have to my creative work. I have put my visual art on hold for now. :(

With a full time job, I don’t have too much time for my poetry. So while I am grateful for the invitations for the Poet’s Rally, I just don’t have time to add other things. I visit my friends websites when I am able.

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