Haiku Pause

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1. on 2009/12/12 at 11:50 | Reply blissbait

   Wow! I love this one Robert! It actually bent my brain, which is brilliant. Had to read it over and over. I have no haikus today. Brain’s spent. But I do have big hugs and Thank Yous and Namastes! :)

   
   
2. on 2009/12/12 at 13:36 | Reply Existential Poet

   Hello, Blissbait! I kept thinking that sooner or later, someone would comment on this haiku. I like it, too, and it dovetails nicely with the previous haiku, “bird shadows.”

   Hope you are having a great weekend…

   Is it still snowing over at your place? LOL!

   
   
3. on 2010/01/29 at 01:53 | Reply Tomas

   Wow!… Clouds appear in the window …
   shadows disappear ….Thank you. I rewrote these words into my notebook, made my favorite quote. Your haiku overview our life – explain and answer everything. The simplicity and the incredible depth put under a charm. What eloquence!
   I will be proud of quoting them – your haiku will be the motto of my art shows from now. Thank you once again.

   http://dayfly.wordpress.com/ from http://arthiker.wordpress.com/ and my all other locations on a web were made your fans by the magic of your poetry
   http://candleday.wordpress.com/

   
   
   • on 2010/01/29 at 10:28 | Reply Existential Poet

     Hello Tomas! Thanks for the nice comments. I should tell you that I am not too active in this blog anymore. It got too big so I started a new blog, Existential Poet. http://existentialpoet.com/ I hope you will check it out if you have time. If you are like me, you are quite busy with your life!

     My day job was canceled today. We had a lot of snow, much more than usual. So it’s a nice holiday. Hopefully I can get some writing done. :)